You know. I hadn't the faintest what that meant. And honestly, the first time I read it in the romance I was reading, I glossed over it.
Then the author continued to use the word about every third page, and that grew old incredibly quickly.
It means, indifference, by the way. Which is how I felt every new time I tried to start reading it again after it took me out of the story.
Word usage is key.
Using words like "had" and "very" is frowned upon. Passive voice is not popular, either.
But...and it's a HUGE BUT...what works for some may not work for others.
There are basic issues in writing that we should avoid. But there are also so many damn rules that need to be broken.
It's completely up to the author to set those parameters for him or herself. Does the story flow? Or does it pitch and roll like a ship in a storm? Are you using the same adjectives over and over again? Does your pronoun usage become repetitive?
Shake it up, my friends!
One of the best things you will ever do is to listen to that little voice inside telling you all about the story you need to write. And while you will literally NEVER finish editing, your job is to polish that damn thing up until you can see yourself in it.
"Don't use a five-dollar word when a fifty-cent word will do." Mark Twain, you sly old dog. You said a mouthful.
Always writing*
Then the author continued to use the word about every third page, and that grew old incredibly quickly.
It means, indifference, by the way. Which is how I felt every new time I tried to start reading it again after it took me out of the story.
Word usage is key.
Using words like "had" and "very" is frowned upon. Passive voice is not popular, either.
But...and it's a HUGE BUT...what works for some may not work for others.
There are basic issues in writing that we should avoid. But there are also so many damn rules that need to be broken.
It's completely up to the author to set those parameters for him or herself. Does the story flow? Or does it pitch and roll like a ship in a storm? Are you using the same adjectives over and over again? Does your pronoun usage become repetitive?
Shake it up, my friends!
One of the best things you will ever do is to listen to that little voice inside telling you all about the story you need to write. And while you will literally NEVER finish editing, your job is to polish that damn thing up until you can see yourself in it.
"Don't use a five-dollar word when a fifty-cent word will do." Mark Twain, you sly old dog. You said a mouthful.
Always writing*
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